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Submitted on
February 22


15 (who?)
Hello :3
I'm bored again.

I walked down the dark street hoping to find someone, but there no one in sight. I was in a deserted city, in the middle of the night. I don't know how I got here, but I need to get home. As I tried to regain my lost memory I felt something behind me, someone watching me. My eyes widen in terror as hands grabbed me by the waist. 

"Got you"

I struggled but finally broke from its grasp, I ran, heading towards a forest. There I hid behind a large tree, hoping that it wouldn't find me. Minutes past and nothing accord. I think it's gone, I gotta get out of here. I walked around the forest trying to remember the exit, but I couldn't. So there I stood in complete silence in the middle of the forest, waiting to wake up from this nightmare. From afar I could hear a slightest melody, I know this song. Hmmmmmmm.....Pop goes the weasel, yeah thats the song. 

I think I should follow it, maybe there is someone that could help me. The song got louder and louder the closer I got. THERE! There was a huge circus. All the tents were a dark purple, the lights flickered and there seemed to be no one here. I looked around, entering every tent there was. Just like the city this place was also deserted. I think I looked everywhere but that huge black tent, the thing is, I REALLY DON'T want to. 

You know what, I'm going in, there might be a tiny chance that there could be someone that could help me. As I entered I noticed that this tent was way different from the others, there was no dust anywhere and it seemed like someone lived here. There was a huge bed in the middle and clothes on the floor. I wonder why all the clothes were the same; white and black stripes. 

"You know, it's not nice to enter a persons room with no permission."

I jumped. 

"I-I'm sorry, I didn't m-mean--

"Relax, it's ok. Names jack, can I help you with something?" he said as he got closer to me.

"I'm lost, I was wondering if you could tell me where I am."

"You're in a tent." He giggled

I smiled "No but really, where am I?"

"Please sit, I'll make you some tea." (Tea? Really? Jack what's up with you?)

He left the tent. I sat on his bed; it was the only place there was to sit. I looked around and noticed a shiny object peeking from under his bed. I grabbed it but dropped it immediately; it was a knife covered in blood and now my hand was covered too. I looked under the bed and saw a bag, underneath it was a puddle of blood. 

"Here's the tea." 

I was about to grab it but remembered that my hand was bloody. I nervously laughed as I pulled my hand away, using my other hand to grab the tea. He just smiled and sat next to me, I could feel that he knew something was wrong. He got closer to me and played with my hair. I know it might sound weird but, even though he scared me a little, he also made me feel safe. in a jerk he grabbed me by the hand and pulled me upwards dropping me in the center of his bed. 

He got on top of me and and began kissing my neck. He smiled and giggled everyone and a while. I grabbed his face and kissed him. He pulled away noticing I would never. He smiled. 

"It's time for you to leave. Here." He got of the bed and grabbed a candy from his nightstand. 

"What? Why?" I asked confused and sad.

"Don't worry, I'll see you again."

I ate the candy, I felt dizzy, the whole tent spun, as this happened I could hear the song pop goes the weasel.

"Bye (Name)."

"(Name) get the hell up you're going to be late for school" Screamed my Mother/Father

"So I guess it was all dream."

I got off the bed and took a shower

15min Later

I entered my classroom and sat in my seat.

"Hello class. I have good news we have a new student. Say hello."

I looked up

"Hi, names jack." 


Finally finished. Hope you like it. :3

  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: Welcome to the show
  • Drinking: Milk
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graceprime Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist
Iz dere more????? plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me dere iz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Flower7814 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There will be.  Sorry for the sloooooooooooow uploads. onion sad 
I'll be uploading next week. :funnydance: 
graceprime Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist
jaydee0527 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Writer
Oh nice.
musicpackwolf Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist


Iz must have moar!
Flower7814 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And there will be.:D (Big Grin) 
musicpackwolf Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
msloneybutohwell Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Jack you sly fox...wait I mean killer. Showing up at school.
Good job!
Flower7814 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked it. :3

msloneybutohwell Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Im glad I read it!^^
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